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metron007 发表于 2023-4-23 12:27   只看TA 21楼
在众多色文中最喜欢的还是家丁同人，里面的主角各有特色，质量特别高，非常适合写同人，特别是本文非常好，就是女主面对陌生人堕落速度过快，心里描写有些不太合理，另一篇家丁同人册母为后以亲子关系这个说的过去，还有那个绿意凛然以意外和生子为突破口也不错，除了突破口有些不合理，其他剧情描写的质量相当不错了
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wsddg 发表于 2023-4-23 12:58   只看TA 22楼
能不能续写一点可可或者是二小姐的剧情啊，她们两个真的可爱
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